Hi it's Isaac Pryor from Dairy flat school I was just calling to see if me and my friends could come and sing to you on Wednesday next week. We will be there at around about 1.00pm and leave at 2.30 pm.
Worst case scenario:They say no to Wednesday
Thats ok could we come any other day
Nice start Isaac. Would be good if you added more detail telling them exactly why you are coming to sing to them. Explain that you are doing it as a project in school to make a difference. Would be great if you used correct grammar - say 'My friends and I' rather than 'me and my friends'
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